Chris Dunfield
Stacey Knapp
English 1A
05 May 2013
Changing
Society
If I
could change some things about society, I would break up the
monopolization of business in the United States and put checks on
these multinational-corporations that have the power to override
international laws on environment, trade, etc. Major corporate
companies like Kraft, Nestle, Coca-Cola, Viacom, Warner
Brothers---the list goes on-- are committing act of massive violence
against the environment, and thus indirectly to the community
(usually of impoverished regions), yet people are sadly unaware of
what's going on outside their boarders. Furthermore, I would invest
in local infrastructure and business, not outsourcing, which only
results in a kind of race to the bottom in which companies compete to
offer the lowest labor prices. One could actively help by buying
things that are created through methods of fair-trade and not
supporting conglomerate corporate companies. I would lessen the power
and increase the transparency of federal governments, the
International Monetary Fund, World Bank, World Trade Organizations
and affiliated financial groups. I would decrease funding of military
and reduce the severe practices of austerity taking place. These
practices of austerity, or cutting of social services, result in loss
of the educational ability of American society, as well as others.
Additionally it degrades the richness of our culture, as well as the
ability of the lower class to move out of poverty, something very
much needed in the creation of a utopia, or even a fair community.
These
actions are very important because to actively create social reform,
change must come from all levels of society. Holding corporations
responsible for what they do, and limiting both their power and how
big they can get would help move our economy towards a more fair one.
We must make steps to limit the power of the federal government and
corporate powers would potentially give power back to the community
and increase the ability to have a part in the creation of culture,
mainly through media exposure. It would put less stress on the
environment with the decrease of transportation of goods, and put
people in undeveloped nations on a more level platform. The current
capitalist system relies on exploitation of workers, outsourcing, and
informal neo-colonial policies, which is unsustainable and unjust.
Reducing cuts to social services and military spending would increase
the ability of the educational system of multiple societies,
resulting in a more aware socially, economically, and politically
conscious population; once these actions have been taken I am
confident a more civil and just society could be created.
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Brief, but I like how you are starting to formulate your ideas here. I think doing some research on these topics using Cabrillo's databases will really help you to more clearly identify some of the reasoning behind these great claims. Nice job getting working through the frustration of these open ended assignments and really working toward the goal of getting the ideas that are important to you down on paper (uh, electronic paper that is!) We'll spend class time this week focused on the process of writing and working on building your argument with more information on form and the rhetorical appeals of ethos, pathos, logos. I encourage you to add more words to each post because your critical thinking is great, you just don't have quite enough development here. (Remember: try for 500 words each week)
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